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mikeblas
01-17-2007, 03:28 AM
The heatsink article has some really serious problems. Can anyone commit to working on it?

kill4killin
01-17-2007, 05:54 AM
It seems to be very informative thats for sure.

It just needs a little refinement in my opinion. All the info checks out as far as I can tell it just seems like it was written by someone who knew what they were talking about and thus put terminology that they understood but never really defined what they meant for the rest of the people reading...

dekard
01-17-2007, 12:34 PM
I've completed round one of the updates. It should be much more serviceable now.

mikeblas
01-17-2007, 02:05 PM
Please read my notes on the talk page, kill4.

Thanks for taking a cut at it, Dekard. It's lots better, now. I've left some more comments on the talk page.

dekard
01-17-2007, 02:47 PM
Glad you like it. I'm going to be out of the office all day, so I won't get a chance to check the comment page but I'll look as soon as I get home tonight.

kill4killin
01-17-2007, 07:20 PM
Please read my notes on the talk page, kill4.

Ah, it appears we have the same opinion of it. Unfortunately I am not a chemistry expert. And from the looks of it it seems as though whoever edits at least the beginning with the acronyms will need to be familiar with chemistry or at least the make up of metals.

thedaftgamer
07-27-2007, 05:50 AM
i added a bit, formatted it a bit more, advise, change, improove?

dekard
07-27-2007, 09:54 PM
That article is much improved from the last time I looked at it. Good work to all involved.